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ESCAPE THE FATE
Escape the Fate is an American band from Las Vegas, Nevada. Their sound is comparable to bands like From First to Last and Eighteen Visions.the gendre of band is screamo band.
The band came randomly together through MySpace when Ronnie and Max were looking for new band members after their prior group abruptly fell apart.
On the popular news, they soon found guitarist Bryan, who subsequently brought in Vegas transplant and guitarist Omar (ex-Lovehatehero). Friend and drummer Robert join to complete the group. Debuting live barely a month later, the personil found early success on local radio and quickly amassed a devoted hometown following.
By September 2005, they had won a local radio contest judged by My Chemical Romance, which awarded them the opportunity to open show on the band's current headlining tour with Alkaline Trio and Reggie and the Full Effect. They then signed to Epitaph Records. Their debut five-song EP, There's No Sympathy for the Dead, appeared in May 2006.
Esacape the fate is the bestest The hardcore Alternative-Metal collective Escape The Fate band in American.i really like this band.many people didn’t like alternative and screamo band but im not I really like it so much.this band make my spirit come back again.
Previously,I want to be a personil of band and make a rock band with ma friends.but my paren didn’t give me excuse.i have been bought a guitar and piano.but,my ambission was lost.nd after I find and download the song of escape the fate my ambission come again.i hope that one day I can met with this band.i want to be success like this band.

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DIANA MARDIKA
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  At during this time i always feeling life's beautiful.but that 's wrong.
when i have something problem,i feel my life so bad,so difficult.... ten years ago,i get the bad experience.my suster was died because collision by general mof car.i can't received that accident. since that accident i hate driver,always hate..hate forever!!!
3 years ago the God take my  brother also when he was born in the earth.im so sad,i think the God not fair with me.why all people that i love go on leave me???
i'm alone,i'm empty,i'm lost,this is the bad my experience in my live.ten years i feel the God not fair with me.but now,my parent make me awake.they 're always be patient eventhough have a big problem.they never give up.and so,i know...in this live we need a patient............

Hello,,
how have u been??
it so long tome i'm not wrote my daily diary...

Today is a very bad day for me, i hate meet with someone who never realize with her fault. i was confused, is she people or not? because she never thinking before talk to someone!!
i'm so regret that i have known her. i think i need to stay away from her.. she is not good for being my friend and many friends said if she give a bad effect for me.

and after i have stayed away from her, i'm so relief..
that is a good choice...

:)